Wednesday, April 16, 2008

Touch

I've always been waiting,
close at your shores,
for a touch now and then,
You came; touched me.

But the million others on the shores,
were touched too.
And my heart lies broken at your shores,
it bleeds love, n now;
you've turned crimson.

Eventually I'll melt away,
in your vastness, unfound.
But I've touched you, yeah.
Like no one else did.

You can cure me;
but I wouldn't want you to.
Let me touch you this way;
Like no one else can.

9 steps to heaven:

g-man said...

aaaaaaargh! me no understand

amk said...

can do betr:P

c.H.a.O.s FrEaK said...

i know ....:)

fathoming de truth abt dis soul said...

brilliant & ofcourse veryy touchin..
hey , she wld fall 4 u , if she knew dis is 4 her..

fathoming de truth abt dis soul said...

brilliant & ofcourse veryy touchin..
hey , she wld fall 4 u , if she knew dis is 4 her..

Achu said...

this dint cum up to the mark...ravings of a vampire aanu enikketovum ishtapetta poem..athupole thakarppan poems ezhuthu kutta[:P]

fantasia said...

it is beautiful...
"My heart lies broken at your shores...
It bleeds, love and u've turned crimson..."

i envy you for writing these lines...i envy the fact that you can feel this to write this...

c.H.a.O.s FrEaK said...

Ah Don't sue me for plagiarism Leona Lewis ...!!

Bleeding love is a song of hers, and "bleeding love" could be called plagiarism. I hope it doesn't.

But yeah ....all marks to me for feeling it. [:d]

unni said...

dude..... Before you melt away, the waves would have taken u over..... not because u were just one another on the shore... but because u would have been de one who touched, "Like no one else did"... fly high on the wings of hope..... Let providence guide you....